Abandoned Amusement Parks Are Creepy By Sarah J. McNeal, #TheWildingsSeries
In my short story, THE BEAST OF HAZARD, from Prairie Rose
Publications, I wrote about an unscrupulous circus owner who abandons his
circus that wreaks havoc and danger on the fictional town of hazard, Wyoming.
I started researching abandoned amusement parks and, I
have to tell you, there is nothing creepier than a place where laughter and fun
once resided, now desolate and eerily silent. Imagine, on a hike in the forest,
stumbling upon a metal clown half buried in the dirt and a Ferris wheel covered
in vines out in the middle of nowhere. Even worse, imagine in the middle of a
meadow with low lying fog coming across life size statues of dinosaurs. One
might even think the creatures were real at first sight. I, for one, would run
shrieking and screaming. Roller coasters and carrousels appear particularly
sinister empty of passengers and slowly eaten by vines and trees. It just makes
me shiver to think how they must appear to someone who might come upon them by
accident.
Near my home in North Carolina is an abandoned mill. I
saw it every time I drove to the beach down highway 74. The old mill has
deteriorated and kudzu vines have taken over most of the structures. It
fascinated me, and it creeped me out. Of course, I had to get some photographs
of it. Here is one of them.
In my story, THE BEAST OF HAZARD, an entire town is in
danger just as the children are preparing to go out trick-or-treating. What is
this beast? And what are the townspeople going to do to protect themselves as
well as their livestock?
Joey Wilding
isn’t certain what’s killing the livestock in Hazard. Some believe it’s a
bewitched beast, others a wolf gone rabid. As the town veterinarian, he’s seen
mutilation before, but not like this, as if something enjoyed the killing.
When Claire
Beau asks Joey to help her injured wolf-dog, and begs his discretion, he begins
to suspect he has found the Beast of Hazard—and its beautiful mistress. But as
he walks through the woods after dark, something more ominous than any wolf
stalks him from the shadows.
Excerpt:
Joey walked through the woods to take the shortcut
back home. Even in the half-light of approaching night, he could find his way
back to the Wilding ranch. He sensed rather than saw something move just on the
other side of the old pond. He kept his eyes and ears alert as he made his way
through the low brush.
Something’s following me. Menacing and dangerous, it seemed to stalk him
from somewhere beyond the bushes. Without a gun, he only had a knife to protect
himself. His best option was to pick up his pace without running to get back to
safety. Running would draw attention to him and whatever it was that shadowed
him, it would identify him as prey.
And then he heard it growl. The ground practically
shook beneath his feet with its deep, low pitched sound. Never, in all his
life, had he heard such a sound. If death made a noise, it would sound like
that. Heart pumping adrenaline made his hands shake, but he knew not to let it
show. With every ounce of will he possessed, he put one foot in front of the
other until he reached home.
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Oooh, fab excerpt! I have to agree with you. Abandoned amusement parks are VERY creepy. Great inspiration for a scary story, and perfect timing for Halloween.
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ReplyDeleteThe Beast of Hazard was the first of your stories I read. It's a lively, spooky October-Halloweenish story. ;-)
Abandoned amusement parks and hospitals are creepy. Two blocks from me, an abandoned, old timey doctor's house / hospital-in-the-windowless-basement was razed a few years ago, and a new house built on the site. It's a lovely, modern house with landscaping and a friendly, older couple living in it. I walk my dogs or drive past this house daily. Back when it was the abandoned dr house/hospital, it exuded an eerie feeling of needing to rush past it as fast as possible without looking directly at it, while simultaneously feeling a beckoning to peer in the windows. There was definitely 'something' there...memories...spirits... *shrug* The new house gave it a facelift, but it still occasionally creeps me out, and I hurry on down the sidewalk or street to get away from it.
Places/locations collect memories and feelings.
Kaye, I'm so happy you read "Beast of Hazard!"
DeleteThank you for sharing that story about the doctor house/hospital. Some places just have an unsettling aura about them. I particularly liked your last sentence about places/locations collecting memories and feelings. I believe that to be true even though I think of myself as a "realist." The older I get, the more I believe there is more to this world than what we can see or touch; there is always that "other."
I so appreciate you coming by and commenting on my post, Kaye. You're so supportive to us.
Christine, there are many abandoned amusement parks all over the world. It would really creep me out to take a walk in the forest and come upon these artifacts. YIKES!
ReplyDeleteThank you so much for your comment. I hope you have a fun Halloween, even in these weird Covid times. I don't know if there will be any trick-or-treaters this year. I would have to come up with something else for them to do like hide-n-seek for treats at home. No carnivals, no parties, and no costume balls this Halloween. It feels sad.
All good things to your corner of the universe, Christine...
I agree that abandoned amusement parks are creepy. Even active ones that are closed for the winter are unsettling. Your excerpt is spooky - and in keeping with the season. Happy Halloween!
ReplyDeleteThank you, Ann for your kind words about my excerpt.
DeleteI guess the location of the Renaissance Fair during winter does look creepy and strange, too. Didn't think about that. Carowinds closes in winter, but I've never had the opportunity to actually see it closed like that. Probably is kinda eerie.
Thank you so much for your comment, Ann. I really appreciate it.
I liked reading your blog and excerpt, just in time for Halloween. Your blog triggered a memory of watching a movie a few years ago and now it's going to bug me trying to remember what it was called and who was in it. Google, here I come. I hope keywords will help me track it down. And yes, it's so uncertain if there will be tricksters out this Halloween. The mall and a few "haunted" houses held activities/tours in other years, and we'd have less and less tricksters ringing/knocking at our door. But I bought treats regardless. Happy Halloween to you, Sarah. I look forward to reading this story.
ReplyDeleteElizabeth, Halloween has lost its luster this year--no activities planned, not even a haunted house. The media had discouraged kids from trick-or-treating. I expect there may be a few kids who might do it anyway. I've ordered up some Kit Kat bars just in case.
DeleteI hope you have a fun Halloween all the same, Elizabeth. I might watch some not too scary movies like Hocus Pocus. Scary movies give me nightmares. Yikes!
I hope you get a chance to read The Beast of Hazard--but mostly, if you do, I hope you like it.
Thank you so much for coming by today and commenting on my post. I always love seeing you.
Love the Wildings. Any clown is creepy to me. Can't imagine coming across an abandoned amusement park. Eek#
ReplyDeleteOhmagosh, Diana, thank you so much for your kind words about my work.
DeleteI think clowns are creepy, too--especially after I read Stephen King's "IT". Shiver! I can't imagine coming across a clown from a dead amusement park in the middle of the woods. I'd be screaming all the way home.
I appreciate you coming by and commenting and for all your gracious support, Diana.
Have you checked out Dogpatch, Libertyland, and Wonderland?
ReplyDeleteHave you checked out Dogpatch, Libertyland, and Wonderland?
ReplyDeleteLibby, no I haven't checked out those places. Where are they located? Have you seen them? Are they eerie?
DeleteThank you for your comment, Libby...
Abandoned amusement parks are so creepy, but mostly I'm intrigued by them. Great inspiration for a scary story. I penned a tale about a haunted water park with fog-filled pools that used to house water and a ghosts that still stroll the grounds. It's a lot of fun but then I love ghosts and haunted places. lol I'm looking forward to reading your story!
ReplyDeleteKaren, I have read some of your books and you certainly know how to write a scary story.
DeleteThank you so much for coming by and commenting.
Picked up a copy. :)
ReplyDeleteOh my, thank you so much, Karen!
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