My novel, The Comanchero's Bride, is in the company of five
other outstanding western romance novels in the Prairie Rose Publications’ boxed
set, Under a Western Sky. Six great novels in one tidy package. How
wonderful is that?
A little about The Comanchero's Bride...
The country music artist, Marty Robbins, has been an
influence in my writing since...well, since forever, it seems. Themes and
snippets from his gunfighter ballads and songs of the Old West show up in my
stories as my little way to pay homage to a man I greatly admire.
His ballad,
Meet Me Tonight in Laredo, is the inspiration for The Comanchero's Bride. I
expanded upon the 'forbidden love' between the woman (Elizabeth Bradford White)
and the former Comanchero (Mingo Valderas), and added the woman's spurned and
revenge-seeking suitor (a well-connected politician).
Meet Me Tonight in Laredo on YouTube
Here is an excerpt from The Comanchero's Bride.
At the livery, Mingo remained in the shadows where he could
see both ways along the street. Opening the wagon doors just wide enough to
allow him to pass through, he eased his way inside. Speaking in a low soothing
tone to his horses, he packed and saddled them under the moonlight coming in
from two windows. Opening half the double doors, he led the two riding horses
out the back, tied them to a corral rail, and returned for the packhorse.
He no more than reached the packhorse when a cold voice in
the shadows stopped him in his tracks.
“Don’t turn around, Valderas.”
Mingo froze. A few more steps and he would have been on the
off side of the packhorse, but where he was, he had no protection.
“I’ve got a good bead right between your shoulders. I know
about your fast draw and the price on your head. I’ve also heard stories about
your throwing knives, so keep your hands where I can see them.”
“You know me. But who are you? What do you want?” Mingo
didn’t care. He knew the challenge from the shadows was a bounty hunter. He
needed the man to talk so he could pinpoint his location.
“I came out of El Paso. A man named Jack added to the price
on your head—dead or alive—and some politician is offering a pretty penny on
top of that to bring in the woman you have with you. He wants her alive.”
From the sound of the man’s voice, he hadn’t moved and was
off to his right. Mingo fought the urge to whirl and fire, but shooting blindly
was not his way. He wouldn’t risk wild shot that could injure a horse, and
gunfire would bring others into the fray. Shadows were both his enemy and ally,
depending upon how he used it.
“The way’s clear behind you, so back towards the open wagon
door, and keep your hands away from your body. When I heard the talk of a
Mexican man traveling with a white woman, and they were staying at the hotel, I
fig-ured I’d hit pay dirt. I was just supposed to worry you into making a wrong
move. Never thought I’d be the one to catch you.
“I’m taking the woman to El Paso. You, I’m locking up in the
back room of the saloon for safe keeping…unless you give me an excuse to kill
you right now, which I’ve a yearning to do. I can’t miss at this range. It
wouldn’t do my reputation any damage to be the man who took down Mingo
Valderas.”
Now, he knew who he was up against. Earl Johns was vicious
and a killer, a back-shooting coward. Mingo inched backward, buying thinking
time.
“Where’s the woman, Valderas?”
“There is no wom—”
“She’s too close for your comfort.” Elizabeth’s voice cut
through the night. The sound of a shotgun hammer pulling back was an angry,
lethal sound that made the hairs on Mingo’s arms prickle.
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Until next time,
Kaye Spencer
AHHHHH....I love me some Mingo....and Elizabeth....This was a wonderful, wonderful story. Loved everything about it!
ReplyDeleteThanks, Cheryl. ;-)
DeleteYour story was perfection! The hero was dashing and the heroine a winner. I loved the settings and the history. I remember mentioning to you after I read The Comanchero's Bride that was obvious you'd done your research. It's always interesting to hear what inspired an author to write a particular piece.
ReplyDeletePatti,
DeleteThank you. I'm delighted you like the story. I agree wholeheartedly about how interesting it is to learn the inspiration behind a story. A phrase. A song. A snippet of conversation. A picture. Story fodder is everywhere. ;-)
Great excerpt! Love the thought of her pulling a gun on him.
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ReplyDeleteThanks. Elizabeth (Isabelle) is new to guns, but she's a fast learner and she's finding out how tough she can be. ;-)
So fun to revisit a wonderful story. Thanks. Of course the other storis in the set are fun too, but ...
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