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Monday, October 19, 2015

DEVIL, ANGEL, HEAVEN, HELL? and a GIVEAWAY BY DORIS MCCRAW/ANGELA RAINES


I confess, I'm not a fan of Halloween or horror, unless it's the film "Hush Hush Sweet Charlotte" or the television show "Supernatural". I've been called names because I don't like chocolate, so go ahead and say I'm a bit strange. You will not get any argument there. I know I'm strange because when I was about six, I saw a tiger lying across from my bed. The family was adding to the house and there was company. My parents were showing off the new addition and my brother and I were in the bunk beds in the kitchen and there was this tiger lying there looking at me. Later, after the addition was done, I had a robed person stand at the end of my bed. I will point out, at no time was I frightened. Go figure!



I also grew up with books and stories of miracles, angels and choices. So when the story "Angel of Salvation Valley" popped into my head I ran with it. To explain how the pieces fit together, that's a bit harder. Let's just say, the stories of my youth and years spent working in the judicial system (think lock up) all conspired to play a part. So I hope you all will enjoy "Angel of Salvation Valley". Below is a bit of Halloween candy (I had to do that**GRIN**).Be sure to comment by October 20 for a chance to win a copy.

Excerpt: 

Luke had come at twilight and he'd missed dinner. His stomach was beginning to complain about the lost meal. As Harold walked in, Drew backed away, fearful the whole talk of getting out had been a set-up, and he was in for more punishment—torture, really. The look in Old Harold's eyes signaled to Drew he'd been correct in his assumption. The blood stain on the wall was a testimony to the reason for his apprehension. He waited for the other two to join Harold, but they were nowhere in sight.

"Here ya go boy. Knowed you missed your meal," Harold said.

Drew just stared, sure it had to be a trick.

 "Come on boy, it's a-gettin’ cold," Harold chided. "I he'ted it up fer ya."

"Just set it down, I'm not really hungry," Drew said, staring at the old man. Despite his hunger, this uneasiness he couldn't ignore.

 "Suit yerself, boy, I'll be back in a bit to get the dishes," Harold said as he left the cell, locking the door behind him.

Drew stared at the food, fearful of what might happen if he ate it. He didn't trust Harold. His whole world was being turned upside down. He stared out the window, just catching a glimpse of the first star. The window was the worst torture. He could see out, but the world was just beyond reach. It was cold in winter and hot in summer, but it had helped him to see the outside. Finally, hunger won out and he turned from the window. Taking his first bite, he knew he'd made a mistake.

Angela Raines is the pen name for Doris McCraw. Doris also writes haiku posted five days a week at (coming up on one thousand haikus):
http://fivesevenfivepage.blogspot.com


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17 comments:

  1. Thanks for the great post. I would not trust Harold either.
    debby236 at gmail dot com

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    1. Thanks for stopping by Debby. Unfortunately Harold isn't the only problem, but...he was fun to write. Doris McCraw/Angela Raines-author

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  2. Oh, Harold was so evil. Loved this story, Doris. What an emotional roller coaster for Drew--all the way through!

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    1. Thank you Cheryl. This story just wanted to be told and I appreciate it letting me tell it. (Sounds almost as strange as some of the events in this book. **Grin**) Doris

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    2. Looks like a winner, Doris. I would love to read it. I'm not much on horror either but spiritual manifestations are intriguing. Best of success.

      Robyn Echols w/a Zina Abbott

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    3. Thank you. I appreciate your support. I did enjoy the folks in this story and hope others will love them as much as I do Robyn/Zina. Doris

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  3. Hmmm, not sure why exactly but I certainly don't trust Harold. Nope, not at all.
    Congrats on the new release and for giving us a very nice excerpt - even if I do not trust Harold. :)

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    1. Liette, Harold is not even half of the problem for Drew. Oh what a journey he led me on. Hope you enjoy the journey he took. And thank you for the fun and supportive comments. Doris

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  4. I guess we're all a little weird in different ways. I don't care about chocolate either. I'm a marshmallow and gum drop fiend. Although I'm not a fan of horror movies, either. They make me have bad dreams, but Halloween is so much fun. I love it.
    I just wanted to drop by and tell you I wish you all the best.

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    1. Sarah, I'm so glad I'm not alone with the chocolate aversion and horror films. Guess never having kids sorta took the fun out of Halloween.

      I AM glad you stopped by and your wishes are welcomed. I appreciate all the support I've received. Thanks Doris

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  5. Not a chocolate fan either, more of a savory snacker, i.e. chips (crisps for those on the other side of the pond) and definitely not much of a horror fan. Well, horror is OK. Gore isn't. Your excerpt is great. I kept saying, "Don't eat the food, Drew."

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    1. Yeah, another person who isn't fond of chocolate! Somehow I can hear you shouting at Drew. It brings a smile to my lips. Thank you so much for stopping by and commenting. It is appreciated.

      Also looking forward to your next book. Doris

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  6. Oh no. Don't eat it! Sounds like a fun book. Just wanted to stop by to show you a little book love. Cher'ley

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    1. Thank you Cher'ley. I appreciate it very much. Unfortunately he did, but to find out what happened...well it is called an excerpt. **SMILE**. Doris

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  7. I keep trying to comment and hope this works this time. Congratulations on the new book and I hope to read it soon! I love hearing excerpts from books to help draw me into a great story

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    1. Thank you, thank you. As you can see, the comment came through. I appreciate your support as I travel this journey called writing. Doris/Angela

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  8. Thank to my boss picking, Cher'ley has won the copy. Thank you all for stopping by and commenting. Doris/Angela

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