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Tuesday, January 23, 2018

Trails End


Pampered Margarita McIntosh is not used to being forced to do things she doesn’t want to do—but when her father, Jock, sends her away for her own safety, she has no choice. The long journey from Flagstaff to Durango tests her personal strength of will as never before, and the secret she carries in her saddlebag could be the death of her. 

A rough Irish gunman, known to her only as “Rafferty”, is entrusted with getting her to her destination “safe and intact”—something he fully intends to do to claim the reward he’s been promised by Jock McIntosh. With a price on his head, the promised money is Rafferty’s ticket to a new life, and he’s not going to jeopardize that for anything—not even love.

But there are steamy nights and dangers all along the arduous trail for MARGARITA AND THE HIRED GUN, with deadly secrets between them that passion cannot erase. With her father’s enemies after her and the secret she conceals, will Rafferty’s protection be enough to save their lives? And will the heat of their passionate love be enough to seal their future together—if they do survive?



Sometimes as a writer, I have to pull characters and plot lines out of thin air to craft a story. Other times, I’m able to share stories that have lived in my head for years. Such was the case with my first historical western, Margarita and the Hired Gun.

But where did the seeds that took root to become this novel come from? Reading classic quest  or journey tales like the Odyssey and watching old movies with my grandma, that's where.

There’s something about setting a character off on a journey, ending in self-discovery which piques my interest. I love to watch a character being tested and meeting challenges to come out at the end of the trail a stronger person.

Sancho Panza and Don Quixote on the trail
Now, put two mismatched strangers together on that journey and you’ve got a romance of epic proportions.

Hepburn and Bogart in the African Queen
So, it with a nod to all the great journey tales and odd-ball couple movies, I set Margarita and Michael (AKA Rafferty) off on a journey.

Margarita McIntosh is a westerner by birth, but after her mother dies she’s sent to boarding schools out east. In her sheltered life, she’s never had to fend for herself. But, there's a change in her fortunes, and the pampered princess finds herself traveling for weeks on horseback, sleeping on the ground, battling the elements, and facing danger all alongside a big, scary Irishman.

While Margarita’s transformation is about finding her inner strength under trying circumstances, Michael’s journey is more of a spiritual one. Forced to flee Ireland, he has spent in years in America doing just about every bad thing a man can do in order to survive. He entertains Margarita around the campfire with his stories of time spent in a tenement in New York, his escape as a sharpshooter in the Civil War, and riding with an outlaw gang.

Every step forward on their journey together, Michael begins to shed his outer layers. As he starts to see himself fresh through the naive young woman's eyes, he remembers the man he once was and can possibly be again. He tells her his real name and every time she uses it (which she frequently does), it’s like a wake up call to his soul. Margarita is his conscience personified.

One of the most poignant moments in the book (in my opinion) is just as the two have had their first flirty moment, they are attacked. Although Michael saves her, the act of violence repulses Margarita. Michael is pulled right back to Rafferty.

Excerpt: He raised his hand and stroked her cheek with the back of his fingers. Margarita recoiled. He reacted like she’d slapped him. “I saved your life!” “I know, I know. I’m grateful.” The image came back to her. Michael standing over that wounded man, his eyes so dark they looked like cold, black stones, ready to cave the man’s head in with his boot. “This is what I do. You knew that.” “Knowing and seeing are two different things.” He sat back, looking away from her. “Ah, that’s it.” “In getting to know Michael Byrne, I forgot about Rafferty.” He looked back at her with a pained expression, but then his eyes hardened with anger. She sat back further away from him. “Margarita, those two men are not like any men I hazard you’ve ever met before. I know the kinds of things they’ve done. Do you know what they would’ve done to you before they killed you?” He pulled a gun out of his pocket and held it sideways in front of her face. “This is the gun I took off Brady. Do you see the notches in the handle? Each notch represents a person he killed.” “I imagine you’ve killed more.” “Maybe, but he was proud of the people he killed. So proud, he struck a line in the handle of his gun for each kill. I am never proud of killing a man. Every man I dispatch is one more notch in my soul. I don’t need to put notches in my gun.” He stuck the gun back in his pocket. His face contorted with anger. “Listen, I have killed men. Lots of them, and killing is killing. I’m not excusing the things I’ve done. But I vowed when I deserted from the army I would never shoot another innocent man. I’ve had to pull the trigger on men who were ready to do the same to me, and I’ve been hired to take out men who were acting out of the reach of the law. Murderers and outlaws. I may be fooling myself, but I think the world is better off without those men.” He stood up and began pacing, different emotions warring over his face. Then, he turned to her and pointed his finger at her. “And don’t you look down your nose at me. How do you think your father paid for your fancy clothes and schools?” “You said my father didn’t kill innocent people.” “He didn’t have to, because he hired me to persuade them to see things his way. I didn’t have to kill any of them.” He stood up then, raking his hand through his hair, putting his emotions back into order. “Come on, let’s find their horses. You’d like your own mount again, wouldn’t you?” He held out a hand to her, but she couldn’t make herself put her hand in his. He made a clucking sound and turned away from her. Margarita hurried to walk behind him. Whatever else he was, he was her protection, and she now knew there were things to be afraid of.


And, now, Margarita and Micheal hit the trail again along with five other full length novels in Under a Western Sky! And what great company to be in along with Prairie Rose Publications authors Cheryl Pierson, Kaye Spencer, Tracey Garrrett, Agnes Alexander, and Celia Yeary.


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17 comments:

  1. This is such a great story. Thanks for telling the story of how it began. The 'heroes journey' is one of the best their is. Love all of them. Now we can add yours. Doris

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    1. Thanks Doris! I always value a good report from a great author. Yes, I'm a sucker for the heroes journey. As a mother, I've watched my children transform after they'd ventured out on a journey of some kind. So many lessons learned from testing yourself.

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  2. Always fun learning the background of a story!!

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    1. Hi, Kristy! Thanks for stopping by. I like to hear how authors get their ideas. We do store away bits of information as authors. I'm looking forward to you next Creativity post. I once heard the creative person is someone who can make connections to create something new.

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  3. Patti, I remember when you sent me Margarita, and I started reading it, and just couldn't stop. OH MY. What a DIFFERENT kind of story and one I really relished as I was reading it. I remember this particular scene too, and how I loved it. You did such a great job with both of them, but I really LOVED Rafferty/Michael. He has a way of staying with you!

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    1. Hi, Cheryl, I'm glad my story had that effect on you! I love Michael too. It's a challenge to create a character who's done some really reprehensible things and still make him not only a sympathetic character, but a romantic lead.

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  4. Patti,

    You write with such emotion and description that, like Cheryl commented, it's easy to lose track of time reading this book, because it's difficult to put down. Love it a lot. *hugs*

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  5. Awww, thanks Kaye! That means a lot to me coming from you. I haven't read all the books in Under a Western Sky yet and I'm reading them out of order by when I have interviews lined up, but I'm looking forward to reading The Comanchero's Bride. (now I have to go do my blog-a-scene)

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  6. Patti, I really enjoyed Margarita & Michael's journey! Congratulations on a wonderful story.

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  7. Thank you, Tracy! I'm glad you liked it. I'm reading Texas Gold now and preparing some questions for you. You write action so well! I don't know how you do it.

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  8. Sounds like there is a lot going on with this couple to make for an intriguing story. Best wishes.

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    1. Yes, they have quite an adventure! Thanks for stopping by, Cynthia!

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  9. Patti, I hope you see this as I'm way late to this blog, but had a change in cable companies and their access didn't coincide with my two routers and I had no internet or email for 5 days but had to stop by. I adored and was so engrossed in reading Margarita and the Hired Gun when it first released. And now more readers will find this story in Under a Western Sky and are sure to be delighted. Very interesting blog. Wishing you the best.

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    1. Thank you, Bev! I do see you! I saw on Facebook that you were out of commission for a while. Glad you're able to communicate again. Have a good weekend.

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  10. What a good story!And to remember similar characters such as those from the long ago movie The African Queen made the tale rich and worthy of reading! Well done!

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  11. Thank you Celia! I grew up watching and loving those old movies like It Happened One Night and The African Queen. I'm looking forward to reading your story--I know it will be a good one.

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